Rising Rising In Mind Comments

Using the mind positively to help all mankind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

'I am rising, I am rising in mind Bind me not in the dark I am still I am stable with my vision and love' awesome lines, the gift before continuum, the work in poetic completion

Beautiful poem. Full of hope and optimism.

I am new sun in sky of my hopes I rise to reflect rays of my love You teach to do so by practice ever Obeying your command I am rising sure- Marvelous reflections of enlightened feelings.

Beautiful soliloquy with positive attitude, hope and full of self confidence. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

'I am the new sun in sky of my hopes, I rise to reflect rays of my love' is very positive. Full of hope the lines flow so sweet.

By our own actions are lives are surely directed

The poem reflects a life which is happily 'Obeying your command I am rising sure' but at the same time dedicating oneself to karma or action to be able to claim God's bliss. Amazing poem indeed. I write my fortune by my action only This determines my birth's direction