Wednesday, September 6, 2017

Rising Little Falling More Comments

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Child is crawling to walk,
To stand holding the wall,
He is rising little but,
He is falling more in floor.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 23 November 2019

Learning how to walk and talk! ! Childhood. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Muzahidul Reza 08 September 2017

Rising and falling deserve universal regulations in things and beings and in less spiritual state less spiritualities found, great thinking on the base of spirituality, thanks for sharing

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Akhtar Jawad 07 September 2017

Crawling, crawling one day, He will walk rising in love, Like a dove he will fly, Little rising will give light................... A child is a lovely teacher, he teaches to continue the efforts untill success. A lovely observation penned in a beautiful poem.

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Lamar Cole 06 September 2017

Very nice and delightful poem about a child learning to walk.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 September 2017

rising little but falling more. but let know no rise no fall. good job, sir 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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