Thursday, April 14, 2016

Rising In Fall (Ii) Comments

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The snowdrops spring up
in the sun rays that fall down
in her inner angst.
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Marieta Maglas
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Daniel Brick 18 July 2016

The first two lines describe a curious union of unlike, even opposite things - snowdrops/sunrays - they meet briefly in the middle zone between their places of origin. But suddenly these unfeeling natural things are pushed aside because human emotion makes it mark on the poem. Will fire and water (that is, sunrays and snowdrops) help her overcome her angst? I hope so.

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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