Really I am trying
To rise from the water.
Rising from the water
Is necessary, my dear.
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you did well. your lines flow with ease like waters, so soft and touching.
I feel this poem in two ways...the magnificent of appreciation and a perfect life...from heaven...floating forever in utopia...I hope I am right..that is what i feel from your write..thank you it is an inner beauty....
you did well. your lines flow with ease like waters, so soft and touching.