Tuesday, March 6, 2018

Rising From Ash Comments

Rating: 5.0

The past is burnt, life is feathery,
Burning the trunks, grass and leaves,
Powdery residue is left under shadow,
No hope is dead as we are rising.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Indira Renganathan 18 March 2018

Highly impressive...very hopeful to a hurt heart or a bereaved one....a superb poem Kumar...you have a generous and kind heart which reflects in this poem....stay blessed always

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Susan Williams 17 March 2018

The earth rises from the ashes of a devastating fire like a phoenix as does our soul from the scars and ashes of our devastations. Excellent write. A diamond, in fact. I cannot give it a 10 because the voting boxes are closed to me. but I let you know here that it is worth thousands and thousands of 10's. But I think I can still put this on my fav list- I better be able to...GRRRR

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 March 2018

Fearless mood! ! ! Peace and love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 March 2018

Sorry, I am not able to vote this at this time may be due to some technical issues! I will vote it later!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 March 2018

Soul is self luminous light and eternal....I adore the beauty of expression! Thanks dear sir for sharing....10

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Valsa George 07 March 2018

A very powerful and thought provoking write full of positive energy! Loved every line! This 'burn' is only temporary. From the ashes rises the phoenix.....! So the trees now standing bare will once more be clad in green leaves as man rises from death to live eternally! I rate this poem as one of your very Best, Kumaramani sir! Top marks!

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Rini Shibu 07 March 2018

Birth, death and rebirth is the law of nature..thought provoking poem

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 March 2018

Great observations about life and death. We are leafless but not lifeless. New leaves will spring out soon.

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Lyn Paul 07 March 2018

Thought provoking with the want to read again. We do not know what lies ahead and you have expressed these words somewhat chilling and haunting. Love it.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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