Rising Falling Rising Falling Comments

I like your analogy between the sun rising and setting, and human virtues and vices, which are in conflict within each person. 'Only God is good' and free of conflict. Your poem reminds me not to take the sun for granted, as it rises and sets each day.

This sun! ! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Sun is rising at morning we love to see, Sun is falling at evening we say goodbye, wonderfully written, thank you for sharing the poem with us

- -Many of us are rising towards God to meet, Many are falling in vices and going so far, But all are searching for happiness in between, Truth is one trust is one in positive vibrations- - - These are beautiful and very true lines and over all here lies a great poem. Thanks for sharing. Stay blessed.

Amazing observation of how necessary we should learn from nature, this is the reason why we should...i like how soft your words persuading in such big content..its a wonderful read

The rise and fall. A wonderfully written poem about life in its entirety. The ups and downs.

If there is a fall sure there will be a rise.. Success is the outcome of failures Well written

There is always something positive to see. Every fall results in a rise.