Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Rishtey Aur Cheezain.. Comments

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Rishtey aur cheezain
Cheezain jo sanjo kar rakhi jayain
To ghar kitna saja sa lgta hai
Sanwara sa lgta hai
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abhilasha bhatt
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Sonali Ganguly 12 April 2019

heart touching lines.. beautiful, expressive and thought provoking

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Souren Mondal 10 February 2016

'Toote hue rishtey judaye bhi jaayen Tinka tinka katra katra jod kar Jab jode jaatain hain Jud bhi jayen agar itni jaddojehed se To dararon ki chap choot hi jaati hai Rishtey aur cheezain Har maayane main to khai nhi Magar kain maamlon main ek se hi dikhai dete hain' Wow! ! Abhilasaha, ye shaayad tumhari saab se behtareen kavita hai.. Rishton aur chizon ke beech ki faslon ko dur kar ke tum ne unme ek alag sa hi jaan daal diyi.. Bohoot, bohoot, khoobsyuraat kavita hai ye.. Sukhriya...

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Mithilesh Yadav 10 February 2016

Mujhey ye kya samjha Tunney bas ek khilona.... Mein mitti ka putla tu kharish sona.., .... Mere dil ki dhadkan tere chudiyon ki khan khan..... Tera khilkhila key hasna meri ankhon ka Rona.... Grttt penned mam ji

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Aarzoo Mehek 10 February 2016

Cheezein aur rishte jab tooTtein hai to wohi taqleef hoti hai.. Humesha humein inke khone ka dar laga rehta hai. khoobsurat kavita.

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