Saturday, July 6, 2013

Rise The People (Bedroom Tax) Comments

Rating: 4.9

Detonation of a time bomb
just waiting
distribution of retribution
of a lawful kind
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Dave Alan Walker
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Heather Wilkins 22 July 2013

excellent write on a good subject.

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Kelvin Owusu 20 July 2013

An excellent piece great subject matter

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 July 2013

Excellent poem...Great thoughts.

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Jesse Ellsbury 13 July 2013

Being from the US, I'm not sure of the legislative details, but I think it's a powerful statement of social justice. A hard thing to do in just five lines. Excellent poem.

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Vipins Puthooran 10 July 2013

a host of people should come forward/ social justice to be implemented.... good write! ! ! !

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Kevin Halls 08 July 2013

It's the poll tax in disguise. People power will get rid of it!

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Kevin Halls 08 July 2013

It's the poll tax in disguise. People power will get rid of it!

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Paul Brookes 08 July 2013

Very true Dave but we'll never win.

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David Wood 08 July 2013

This reminds me of the peasents revolt in1383 which was crushed by King Richard III, and later, the peasents revolt of 1983 under Queen Maggie Thatcher put down by police trunchions. The peasents are always revolting!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 July 2013

Aha timebombs r scary and dis poem speaks of a simmering trouble waitin to boil over! Kudos poet dave.

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R.j. Wynn 07 July 2013

Interesting poem, love it.

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Wahab Abdul 06 July 2013

a nice poem..and i agree with Ramesh Rai while assessing the poem..

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Gajanan Mishra 06 July 2013

a great thought Dave, thanks.

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Ramesh Rai 06 July 2013

i love your write. a poem of four lines can be explained in 400 pages. i find this quality in your write. a great write indeed.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 06 July 2013

distribution of retribution of a lawful kind that's what the administrators are doing! great write Dave.

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