Detonation of a time bomb
just waiting
distribution of retribution
of a lawful kind
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Being from the US, I'm not sure of the legislative details, but I think it's a powerful statement of social justice. A hard thing to do in just five lines. Excellent poem.
a host of people should come forward/ social justice to be implemented.... good write! ! ! !
This reminds me of the peasents revolt in1383 which was crushed by King Richard III, and later, the peasents revolt of 1983 under Queen Maggie Thatcher put down by police trunchions. The peasents are always revolting!
Aha timebombs r scary and dis poem speaks of a simmering trouble waitin to boil over! Kudos poet dave.
a nice poem..and i agree with Ramesh Rai while assessing the poem..
i love your write. a poem of four lines can be explained in 400 pages. i find this quality in your write. a great write indeed.
distribution of retribution of a lawful kind that's what the administrators are doing! great write Dave.
excellent write on a good subject.