Rise Of The Phoenix Comments

this piece gives a lot of food for thought. like it!

It's somewhat dark to me but it seems it's about an unhappy man when his spouse had a baby he became happy. Anyway I like it.

This piece gives me much to think about. The image of a phoenix is something I need to relate to some other story or myth and your mention of the strong rib that plants a gifted seed is also something that solicits my attention. Is there reference to the Eve and Adam myth? I don't know but this poem leaves room for rich associations. Thanks.

I read and enjoyed! I have interpreted it to my satisfaction and enjoyed the challenge it gave! A great poem!

Great write, love the last stanza.

Well, this work is really good and great. i admire and embrace this poem with my whole existence. you write this work with your fragrant words those just are right and cool. well done Kelvin.

Great poem! With a beauful flow in it and a strong last line.