Rise Of The Crow Comments

Lovely poem. I like it, so much.

Another awesome poem. Great JOB! ! !

Thank You for sharing... i like it very much!

wow, very powerful idea, short poem with complex thought.Yes.it is very nice.best wishes! ! ! !

Strong in fact very strong. Read a few times to get the full impact. Excellent write Dave. Regards. Craig

great poem for a poet who touches heart

Great poem really like it. A great write. ;)

Amazing poem Dave...you always share with us, good stuff.

short but very powerful keep it up Dave

Simple but beautiful!

I like to think we are beautiful souls living many life's... Seeking out the one that can make us shine for all eternity... Dancing forever upon love's stage... Your poem is thought provoking... Keep writing my friend...

The resonance of your poem echoes in my heart. nice poem. with kin regards ramesh rai

I love the way you use the image of the crow. They usually have such a bad press, although a researcher in Cambridge finds that they are very intelligent. Concise and moving.

Powerful! - A beautiful write! - what a great thought written wonderfully!

I hope it's true...that when we die we can come back and still be in the hearts of the person we leave behind. Beautiful piece. Encouraging, even...

Though a short poem, it is a nice write.

I really like this! Very moving!

Short and very powerful, toned and meaningful. Good work Dave!

OH this is the best shot in short, you create a big impact only in small words.. :) I hope one day the crow will rise instead of dying..and the color of the feather evolved to be many as it gained from lessons when the crow was about dying...I love the line 'Rise from the ashes.....into the form of the crow'..no no i guess every line just made well..i cant pick one but whole hahahaha...Very Nice My Bro Dave! ! _Unwritten Soul

death can always bring some source of happiness to a person, thats my personally opinion good job :)