Wednesday, September 14, 2016

Rise Of Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yet again, these memories rise
Like moonless night
Asking to chase the mirage
And those reins in the grim voices
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nosheen Irfan 21 September 2016

Wowwww. Simply divine. You capture the essence of memories so well. Nature is infused beautifully into the thoughts.10plus

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2016

Grim voices! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Indira Renganathan 14 September 2016

Very good poem with nice comparison....interesting..thanks for sharing this lovely work Asim

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Preston Mwiinga 14 September 2016

Like waves on waves And we wonder what the next The night will bring with it. Thanx for the poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2016

Mirage runs with illusion as moonless night crawls in mind to frighten sometimes and gives illusion joy. Sometimes empty mind gets filled in sadness. But morning brings light and clear water reflects truth. Sun rises and happiness comes one day. Memories matter in every case a lot....10

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M. Asim Nehal

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