Rise From The Ashes Comments

The return of the soul and spirit For the heart lend the pulses again Breathing confident To raise the flamed wings again Behind the limb Like burning fires Like a phoenix reclaim dreams From lost life in earth and return again After one more time delivered from dark To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise.......impressive expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

Something rises, and not merely awakens. We can be awake, yet remain trapped. There must be a reason, a source, a hope, even an object that guides aspirations. A great poem, Soul.

This is meaningful. Innocent lost in maturity. The more mature the more we are anxious. I like your powerful similes and the language of the poem suits the message. Well done Soul

Very nice poem. Reincarnating throughout all eternity would be wonderful... Terry

Philosophical poem.Your explanation is so lucid that the theme becomes crystal clear.Nice write!

A soul stirring poem with Zeal and Zest with spirit and soul I hear the cry of your soul yet there hope in this poem of yours. I love reading the poem like child who by-hearts tables.... These line caught my breath and fancy..... Taking over sanity to absorb all energy of living Numb all the strength till wings lost the last flames An Amazing poem by the SOUL so I give her, I favorite flowers - a daisy! A cripes, you may write many like this

Meaning: yours: Like a phoenix reclaim dreams From lost life in earth and return again After one more time delivered from dark To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise Like the world in the begining from nothing to something as love grows it shows...you have touched my soul again...let it never end...a burst of fire...purifies one into believeing how great a darkness can be...turnnel vision sees more from a hearts pionts of view, as did you sayFrom lost life in earth and return again a new begining how wonderful is God's creation (you) woman for a man's spirit to be set a fire...you have good taste as a writer, please continue to please the heart and minds of many...thank you...

''Sent to the earth In the open light White soul delivered out from the dark'' yes! white soul delivered from the dark--from the unknown or from the innocent.......this is a very good saying, i like it very much, an excellent poem.pls read my new poem.

to be shown your vision is wonderful....I see my own soul sailing in the midst of darkness, I find my travels are not alone, as I emerge from the ashes time and time again...blessings

Amazing. It really captures you, Soul. Now I see and understand clearly. Truly beautiful my friend.

very heart felt, i love it, it might be the first poem that i purely love for its meaning, and intention................. that was amazing

Force the soul to vapor above the ashes crude.. Purified soul levitates between earth an sky. A mega black cloud above the ashes. A spark was created, life ignited. All the lines were marvelous, but you are excellent at creating images. Read and reread this and found it fascinating. You are special and it shows in your visions. Write on. It's only right...I will print this to read to my kin. willie

From lost life in earth and return again After one more time delivered from dark To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise Wonderful thoughts, amazing imagery and feelings you spared for us, thank you! I do feel sometimes that everything might happen for a reason and I struggle to learn the lesson, wonder often if this may be what life is about..learning and as you said understanding is the base for peace and calm I do hope I have my calm but I am yet to find my peace..Wonderful write, touched me deep, thank you!

A remarkable lesson of wisdom, through your exquisite taste in poetry..Cristina Teodor

The great cry for one to rise even from the burning ashes and come forward to face the life challenges with love and devotion.Beautiful poem full of wisdom and courage! Deeply philosophical. I simply love souls poem. Must give 10+

For the heart lend the pulses again. I loved this line. Your poems are epoch and quite absorbing. Thanks for your kind comment on my poem 'Till Friday'.

WINNERS ARE LOSERS WHO GOT UP AND GAVE IT ONE MORE TRY.

To raise the flamed wings again Behind the limb Like burning fires Like a phoenix reclaim dreams From lost life in earth and return again After one more time delivered from dark To seek the open light brighter than the sunrise Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise **************** Rise From The Ashes/rise from the sadness....... It's life and we need to live in here amdist all the pain and sadness........ But those who can stretch their wings in these smouldering embers of life's vivdness, can soar like phoenix, again, forgetting their sadness was just like ashes... And this will be the lesson that we learn after each ascension...... No one knows where from we came, , , , But the sky with full of hope and a deep sea with trenches of hoplessness are awaiting us in each second of our breath.... Can we consider sadness as it were just like ashes? Can we imagine that we've wings just like a butterfly, to buzz and to enjoy the different colours and taste of this vale.... It's an amazing poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Top marks! ! ! ! ! Soul, Your loving brother...

To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise. Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise... Yes Soul, through all our hardships we gather experience and wisdom.we learn from our mistakes and the pain makes us stronger, there's no need to think of a life with no challanges coz a man gets strong by standing against the wind..even though that strife need not be against other men...great poem my friend... Your friend. Siya.

A great poem my lil soul, out of the dark into the light A fantastic write. Your brother Dave.