Thursday, June 17, 2010

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In the steady stream of moments,
Moments that expand and grow through this desert,
The searing cold burns these feet we walk on,
And the fog that follows us pulls us closer together,
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Jess Silva
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Emily Oldham 25 June 2010

wooow. definitely 1 of the best poems ive read on here in ages. Especially love the beginning. Keep writing Jess, you're really talented.

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Leila Mass 18 June 2010

I like the metaphors, good poem. When you can, please check out my poems and give me some feedback. I would really appreciate it :)

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