Thursday, September 5, 2013

Rise And Fall Comments

Rating: 5.0

In emotion
i rise above the sky
but when i fall
i fall deep down the sea
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ramesh rai
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Marvin Brato 28 October 2013

Soulful expression.... poetic approached!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 September 2013

Trying to be free from all lives, no more thoughts of rise and fall. Beautifully delivered. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 September 2013

Beautiful poem..Yes, a rise and fall in emotions. finally trying to be free from all live and to be attached to the eternal soul.. Great message. Loved it.

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Neela Nath Das 06 September 2013

Faeo is right.this one is didactic and of course beautiful.

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