Wednesday, October 3, 2018

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Rating: 5.0

To the mountains touching clouds,
a staircase I'm making on.
Blood, tear, bruises
and sour water I'm drinking on.
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Bhartesh Kaushik
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Dr Antony Theodore 19 October 2018

The throne is already mine, for which I'll make blessings rain... my staircase to the mountains near clouds....... a very fine imagination. and determination.. thank u. tony

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Ntsako Manhisa 03 October 2018

Courage and endurance goes hand in hand that's what this learn from this poem. 10++++++ The throne is already mine, for which I'll make blessings rain.

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