Sunday, May 20, 2012

Rise Comments

Rating: 5.0

You have to become
the candle
to bring light
why wait for the sunrise
...
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Madhavi Grace
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Valerie Dohren 24 May 2012

Very philosophical - good one.

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Richard D. Remler 23 May 2012

This is excellent. Short, succinct, and fearlessly clear. That opening stanza stands out powerfully. Wonderful crafting.

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