Rise Comments

This is so inspirational and touching. I loved the way you use the theme of a seed to bring forth plants an hope. 'crush a flower it gives sweet fragrance, that is what we call forgiveness. This is a poem of wisdom which one would not expect to find from someone your age. Excellent! 10 Karin Anderson

INSPIRING...BEAUTIFUL write... beautiful lines lightly touched my heart..... beautiful painted in my imagination... written from deep within your heart.... .............KEEP ON WRITING.............

a new way of expression abt deep feelings...loved it! ! ! !

This is a very thought provoking poem and ends in wisdom. You bring out the necessity to stay positive and it is artfully weaved from your pen. Karin Anderson

That's a very meaningful poem that i have enjoyed Keep up the good work! ! 10.