Monday, October 7, 2013

Riptide Comments

Rating: 5.0

I dip my toes,
cautiously, now
Into the wake that was your wave
That once unseen,
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Susan Lacovara
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Anthony Burkett 02 February 2014

These words remind me of a love lost by my being me... Too much... Too soon...

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Nicholas Garcia 23 October 2013

Dug it a lot. Certainly liked the joining of love and the ocean. Especially liked the first few lines. Good stuff.

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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