Thursday, July 10, 2014

Ripples Of Smiles! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh! My Calm sea
Can I rest in your tranquil bed ever?
Today, your serene beauty touched me so deep
As I never saw you unperturbed ever.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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M Asim Nehal 17 November 2018

Wow...Indeed I quote: A mild wind blew that soothed my heart for a moment...such was the effect of your poem on me...10//10

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 July 2014

Lovely imagery and emotion in a very relaxing poem...I loved reading it.

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Rajesh Thankappan 20 July 2014

A storm is desirable indeed when it lead to sweet turmoil. It is alike taking a ride on giant wheel! A sweet poem.

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Heather Wilkins 16 July 2014

in life there are many storms and ripples but also a lot of sunshine and smiles. nice imagery.

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Hazel Durham 16 July 2014

The contrast of the storms in your life, with the the wild ways of the sea, then in it's calmness you find a stillness that comforts you! With spellbinding imagery you conjure up a triumph of visual therapy!

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Hans Vr 13 July 2014

Lovely integration of feelings in the vastness of the sea. Very well written.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 11 July 2014

very beautiful, deep and serene.

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Salini Nair 11 July 2014

beautiful....... l love each lines read.............

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Salini Nair 11 July 2014

beautiful....... l love each lines read.............

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Valsa George 10 July 2014

This a lovely write Geetha..... with arresting imagery! I feel the tranquillity of your mind and the serenity of the ocean! This well deserves top marks! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 10 July 2014

The poem is full of strings of tides and ripples of smiles. Beautiful lines. Thank you.

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Classic in itself......Geetha........metaphor so elegantly used in terms of calmness of sea with ripples of smiles... simply beautiful.....

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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