Oh! My Calm sea
Can I rest in your tranquil bed ever?
Today, your serene beauty touched me so deep
As I never saw you unperturbed ever.
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Lovely imagery and emotion in a very relaxing poem...I loved reading it.
A storm is desirable indeed when it lead to sweet turmoil. It is alike taking a ride on giant wheel! A sweet poem.
in life there are many storms and ripples but also a lot of sunshine and smiles. nice imagery.
The contrast of the storms in your life, with the the wild ways of the sea, then in it's calmness you find a stillness that comforts you! With spellbinding imagery you conjure up a triumph of visual therapy!
Lovely integration of feelings in the vastness of the sea. Very well written.
This a lovely write Geetha..... with arresting imagery! I feel the tranquillity of your mind and the serenity of the ocean! This well deserves top marks! !
The poem is full of strings of tides and ripples of smiles. Beautiful lines. Thank you.
Classic in itself......Geetha........metaphor so elegantly used in terms of calmness of sea with ripples of smiles... simply beautiful.....
Wow...Indeed I quote: A mild wind blew that soothed my heart for a moment...such was the effect of your poem on me...10//10