Saturday, May 23, 2020

Ripples In The Water Comments

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Like ripples in the water and rising tide
We are not just mere attraction to people passing by
Like ripples in the water I have a powerful source
Who has the strength to sail or sink your boat
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D Loveday Morris
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Rob Lamberton 16 January 2023

"Be like ripples in the water" certainly we all make ripples!

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D Loveday Morris 13 July 2020

Thank you Juliet Languedoc

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Juliet Languedoc 08 July 2020

wonderful unfolding and closing of your poem.

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D. Loveday 06 June 2020

Thank you Tony. Continue to make ropes and may your existence also transcend beyond the grave.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 June 2020

Like ripples in the water seemingly carefree The superficial miss my intentional-ity Like the wind and water making caterpillar waves My existence will transcend the grave This is beautiful and very poetic expressions. tony

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D Loveday Morris 25 May 2020

Thank you Chinedu. It's a pleasure. It means so much to me that you enjoyed it.

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Chinedu Dike 23 May 2020

Well articulated and nicely penned with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing.

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D Loveday Morris 25 May 2020

Thank you so much Chinedu. It's a pleasure. It means so much to me that you enjoyed it.

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D Loveday Morris 25 May 2020

Thank you so much Chinedu. It's a pleasure. It means so much to me that you enjoyed it.

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