Saturday, December 15, 2007

Ripples Comments

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I stand at the edge of the great pond, at dusk,
calmed by the serenity of all that I see.
I skim the smooth stone across the water,
watching it bounce along the surface until,
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Jon Ojala
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Fay Slimm 19 August 2008

Excellent description to bring the reader to the scene, and the ending a brief well-worded glimpse into sad goodbyes. So very well written Jon

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Raveendran . 15 December 2007

The external ripples creating corresponding internal ripples - Romantic!

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