Ripples Poem by julia d

Ripples

Rating: 4.5


i used to think
that words spoken out loud
either to the stars
or a higher entity
would create a ripple effect
it seems as though
in my case
as soon as the rock was thrown
the water beneath it vanished
leaving the rock to settle in one spot
creating no effect
no desired outcome
nothing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 02 January 2025

The effect is not to be seen in the ripples but in the settling of rock....finding its place. Very few are able to say and express it with ease.

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Congratulations on this poem featuring as Poem Of the Day.

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