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Fish:
Dark, slender, uniformed shapes,
Circling round in the shallows;
They glide, seemingly effortlessly,
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You draw the reader in with your imagery. Wonderfully penned. I suppose the order you detail in the poem is far better than entropy. : -)
You draw the reader in with your imagery. Nicely done. I suppose order is better than entropy. : -)
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8/1/2025 3:12:59 PM # 1.0.0
A most beautiful poem filled with wonderfully expressive language and vivid imagery..I really enjoyed reading this..10