Ripples Comments

Like a stone it will sink Leaving the ripples behind Until it vanishes from your sight.....extremely well expressed!

You portray in a very wonderful poetic style connecting to imagery in metaphor creatively. Great in brevity wow! ! Kudos. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

This is a very good heartfelt poem.

Hi Rini, Good to see you back on PH. You have come back with a very nice poem. With fading dreams, life loses its sense of direction. No wonder, heart, sailing in free wind, would reach nowhere, but may sink. So it is important to reinvent the dreams and set sails with a purpose. You have expressed the melancholy feelings with profound clarity. But melancholy poems are so unlike of you. So collect yourself and march forward. Nothing can stop you.

You imagery is perfect. It reminds me of human life.