Wednesday, October 28, 2020

Ripple Of Love - By Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

The breeze gently touched her tender skin
Andkindled the ripple of love in the heart
The shell of desires opened slowly and softly
To sparkle the rainbow of light all around.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 November 2020

A tender poem of love and the aesthetics of love written with beautiful metaphors. Fantastic Asim ji.........5 Stars

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2020

Love's interesting ripple we hear from your nice poem by revisiting this again. An amazing sharing is done.

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Gordon Walter 29 October 2020

Class poem Flowers offered their pure nectar My heart started to pound out of my chest And the nature in its peaceful silence Started to pour the comfort around....Wow 10/10

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Ricky Manhatten 29 October 2020

Attractive title and fantastic poem.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 29 October 2020

When love ripples It unrest water around Making life vulnerable With only single goal To live and die for.

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Zuzu Mutairi 29 October 2020

What are fantastic poem you have written I really enjoyed reading it and I got my favourite lines from your above poem The murmur of her heartbeat could be heard From miles away in silent valley of life The sunflower opened its arms Looking towards the sky of heaven.

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Darren Jkoeryo 29 October 2020

Rich in theme and in vocabulary. Nature is used to ignite love.10**

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Poetic Sky 29 October 2020

Brilliantly written poem. I liked it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2020

Tender breeze touches. Freshness murmur. Flowers offer pure nectar. You have rightly perceived the entire nature. This poem is very interestingly penned.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 28 October 2020

Great metaphors. Basic instinct bringing forth fruit

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