The breeze gently touched her tender skin
Andkindled the ripple of love in the heart
The shell of desires opened slowly and softly
To sparkle the rainbow of light all around.
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Love's interesting ripple we hear from your nice poem by revisiting this again. An amazing sharing is done.
Class poem Flowers offered their pure nectar My heart started to pound out of my chest And the nature in its peaceful silence Started to pour the comfort around....Wow 10/10
When love ripples It unrest water around Making life vulnerable With only single goal To live and die for.
What are fantastic poem you have written I really enjoyed reading it and I got my favourite lines from your above poem The murmur of her heartbeat could be heard From miles away in silent valley of life The sunflower opened its arms Looking towards the sky of heaven.
Rich in theme and in vocabulary. Nature is used to ignite love.10**
Tender breeze touches. Freshness murmur. Flowers offer pure nectar. You have rightly perceived the entire nature. This poem is very interestingly penned.
A tender poem of love and the aesthetics of love written with beautiful metaphors. Fantastic Asim ji.........5 Stars