Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Ripe For Heartbreak And Fresh To Hurt Comments

Rating: 4.5

So bare and naked lay my emotions.
Exposed and out in the open,
For you to abuse if you decided...
That to me you would do.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Shellise Goulbourne 01 December 2009

It was really good! I enjoyed the detail in the poem. Good Job

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Monica Rose 01 December 2009

Very good, but if you dont mind checking out some of mine? It would be greatly appreciated. ~Monica Rose

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Alexander Conway 01 December 2009

I enjoyed reading this. Read some of my own? I would love to hear your opinions.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

Connecticut
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