Rio Comments

Your woman in your poems are beautiful and exciting, your desription is vivid i saved this poem for this morning, my brain is more alert i'm glad i did a bit busy last night Warm regards allan

What a story, as it came to life on the computer, holding onto your every word...Beautiful, awesome and great as usual! Warm and best wishes, Theodora Onken

Enjoyed it very much. A taut, nicely written story, and lots of fun too.

so much can happen in such a small amout of time you've captured this with your write very enchanting the blonde leaves me panting