Saturday, October 15, 2016

Rio Olympics 2016 Comments

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They march in
Flags flying
Cheering, waving, laughing
Young, beautiful, strong
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Eugene Levich
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Eugene Levich 30 October 2016

Well okay, as long as your laugh was subdued. No guffaws please at my expense!

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Eugene Levich 30 October 2016

If it were nuclear war, then old age and ugliness would disappear along with youth and beauty. Zo ztop trying to be zo Bri-ght!

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Bri Edwards 29 October 2016

do you believe the ending caused a subdued laugh from me? it DID. are we 'talking' nuclear war or 'the aging process'? ? if the aging process, then i think it would be say IF she knew the future! well, the same holds true if you were referring to a nuclear war! to MyPoemList. and into November's Section A of my/our showcase. THANKS Gino, my friend. nice one, ................sort of. : ( bri :)

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