Rings Of Smoke! Comments

a good poem about smoke. going up in the rings of smoke not good 10

So many lives go up in smoke Because they lack the will to say no Nicotine their nectar and coke Till its too late to stop or go slow

each ring serves as a noose around his neck.nice message.

You are good Poetess very good! ! ! ! Loved this one! ! ! !

Nice warning to all who smoke. Let life be not blown away as smoke rings. Thank you.

a good one with an important message to chain smokers who puff smoke in the air for enjoyment, later find themselves on bed with a sense of predicament!

interesting one Geetha i love your way to tell this poem, especially how you put the message behind your words nice one

Nice alarming poem for smokers.

Smoke ring life covered by smoke 'the death'

Geetha, when warned this way, definitely it will have greater impact than writing a treatise on the evils of smoking! A good job!