Early this morning
in your temple where you live,
I stand before your holy shrine
ringing the bells of love.
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oh my! I really don't know how to express my appreciation! such a beautiful write! a big 10+++ dear Tony! You are one of my favorite poet and this poem goes to My poemlist
Beautiful romantic poem, especially the words captures ones heart. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
I die with longing for your presence. I need only your eyes to see me now. A beautiful poem of pure love.
Was struck by the thoughtful title of the poem itself. Literally ran out of words to express appreciation for this deep, pensive poem.
A highly commendable piece of work my friend! I vote this great poem with a 10 …….To MyPoemList
Your articulation of ‘I love you’ is utterly perfumed and eternal….your devotion to almighty is laudably articulated in divine tone! My favorite lines: “Early this morning/in your temple where you live/I stand before your holy shrine/ringing the bells of love”. Moreover, the appended photography appears pious and gracious! (Part II)
Would you come down from your holy shrine/my lover of my heart to look at me….I am absolutely delighted with your poetic expression! I can hear from distance the ringing of bells of love! ... Would you come down from your holy shrine/my lover of my heart to look at me…so sublime! I relish each line of this magnificent poem (Part I)
Filled with longing and passion. Love does seem to go hand-and-hand with sleeplessness. I swear we all go back to being teenagers when we fall in love with that certain someone and quite frankly it is as sweet and heavenly as this poem! ! ! Very well written! 10++++++++++
He prayeth well who loveth well Both man and bird and beast. He prayeth best who loveth best All things great and small, For the dear God Who loveth us, He made and loveth all. SAMUEL TAYLOR COLERIDGE If you want to love Him, love all that is good, created by Him.
Another sensitive and heart felt verse from Dr.tony Bramin. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem
Beautifully penned..Ringing the bells of love, longing for lovers love..Wow wonderful lines Tony.
Oh! wonderful imaginary. She is ringing the bell of the temple where as he is ringing the bell of love in the early morning getting from cosy bed. Temple is the holy shrine of her in the other hand his holy shrine is her heart. His longing for love is to see him once with her eyes. Fantastic expression has been made as if the bell of love is ringing. A marvelous poem on longing.10/10
beautiful words.......