Monday, October 22, 2018

Ring Of Gold Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let it begin with a ring made of gold

Spiraling to grand innate desires
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Dawn Novus
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Thomas Plotz 29 October 2018

the tears fall and fall Let them all... They will douse the burnt earth Douse the parched thirsting desert - Healing verse - thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 October 2018

Deep love! The well inside you! ! Unhidden beams of love. Teams and creams of life! Calligraphic Framework of True Love. Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Stay blessed always.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 October 2018

Each diamond between ring of milky-way dazzles with beam of love and greatness. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10

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