Ring Of Friendship Comments

Nice writing Jane

Very moving and deceptively simple looking - the sign of skill. Great work. jim

Sentiments well-described Jane in this piece. write more. Regards.

Hi Jane, Such a touchy moment and how nicely u managed to convey ur feeling to readers! Words in the lexicon r not sufficient to congratulate ur style! In the Vastness of space and immensity of time ur words will survive for ever! U have immense latent tallent, express out, write more for us! Ratneswar Brahmachari ratneswarbrahmachari@yahoo.com

Wonderful sentiment here Jane, you have conveyed the unity that two people can share through both heart and mind. Kind regards, Justine.

very good poem, keep writting you do have some tatent.

Thoroughly agree with Doc, Frank and Jack, more please?

Jane, very beautiful, wonderfully written! Frank

Lovely sentiments, Jane. Unspoken 'words' are often the most heartfelt. Two people completely in synch! I like this very much :) jack.