Sunday, June 17, 2007

Right To Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Did you want to see me die?
Were you sad, did you cry?
Did you never want to hold me, rock me in your arms,
Did you never want to love me, keep me safe from harm?
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Michelle Garner
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David Harris 17 June 2007

Michelle, another beautiful piece of writing here. You have a wonderful way of making the your words just trip off the tongue. I got the impression you were talking about childbirth which is the close to death experience goes through. But this childbirth was a cesarean. Top Mark from me. The imagery was spot on my friend. Thanks for sharing it. David.

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