Saturday, November 20, 2021

Right Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

With every breath we inhale,
With every breath we exhale,
With every tick of the clock,
Our life span is shortened;
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Khairul Ahsan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 April 2022

Perfect. A timely composition dear poet...5 stars

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 April 2022

Five Stars and to my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 April 2022

So brilliantly expressed and beautifully presented. Sandra is right, your pen is full of kindness. Kindness that we really need in this time of uncertainty

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 April 2022

Beautiful, beautiful and thoughtful poem with a great message to humanity. If we abide with the wisdom embedded in this great poem, there will be no war, no killings and no chlidren that are separated from their families or gone too soon.

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 November 2021

As realisation dawns our faith strengthens

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 23 November 2021

There won't be time for performing at the Kingdom of last destination so, need to do good what we want to do

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David Wood 22 November 2021

Another gem of a poem. A poet leaves examples for us all to follow.5*

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SherryGibson 21 November 2021

How Are u

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SherryGibson 21 November 2021

hallo

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Sandra Feldman 20 November 2021

Correction First word of comment should say, ' If '.

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Sandra Feldman 20 November 2021

I more would follow, These beautiful wise words, We'd have a much better World, Much less cruel and hollow. Beautiful poem, full of the kindness and good feelings that so deeply shine in you and your marvelous poetry. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan

Khairul Ahsan

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