Friday, December 9, 2005

Right Keys Comments

Rating: ★5.0

As easily as right keys turn
the tumblers of a lock
we kiss each other as we burn
with equal love, and shock
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gershon hepner
imagination
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Hugh Cobb 09 December 2005

Gershon: Mazeltov! This is so well-crafted and perfectly describes a relationship not understood by the 'general'. Nice use of metaphor and rhyme. A gem of a poem. Hugh

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John Kay 09 December 2005

Gershon...nicely worked out metaphor in the first stanza.

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gershon hepner

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leipzig
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leipzig
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