Wednesday, December 5, 2012

Right Here Right Now Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today
There is no need for you to visit me
I can change light bulbs, tap washers and flat tyres.
Take out the garbage, mow the lawn and trim the edges
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Maggie Munro
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Terry O'leary 30 December 2012

Unusual combination of independence and 'togetherness'... Very nice... Terry

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Paul Brookes 29 December 2012

Great poem reminds me of my indepenent mom Thanks for sharing Have a Happy New Year : O)

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Valerie Dohren 12 December 2012

A touch of reality here, finished off with a dose of romance. Pleased to learn that no snails were harmed!

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Lyn Paul 07 December 2012

How beautiful Maggie. Love you sharing your power and independence but importantly tonights romance. EnjoyXx

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Prasanna Kumari 05 December 2012

there is some freshness in the poem.... with the smooth flow of words we feel it

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