Saturday, March 29, 2014

Right As Rain Comments

Rating: 4.1

Right as rain they say
but how can rain be right
If you're driving
it can be quite wrong
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Nika McGuin
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Kim Barney 17 January 2015

Lighthearted and clever. I never understood that saying, either, and I've been around a long, long time.

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A unique twist that is creative -like a gently flowing river that picks up speed suddenly!

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Daniel Brick 10 April 2014

In the process of dissecting the cliché, you also show the mercurial mind at work, as it follows a train of thought, however unlikely. I was conscious throughout that the speaker is also driving a car as she thinks these thoughts, so it's multi-tasking with the cliché dissection running parallel to driving. The phrase contains an interesting endorsement to whatever it introduces: rain being natural is always right, the comparison to rain means you are right too - how reassuring!

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Yash Shinde 08 April 2014

All the same rain is rain invented to wash away pain thus, here it shall remain so I guess its alright- right as rain can be ..........beautiful lines.........rain really washes away pain and agony.............wonderful write

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Ramesh Rai 30 March 2014

Rain of grace is mighty. love your ink.10+++++

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