Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Riff On Allen Steble's 'There's A Fire Burning In My Eyes's Comments

Rating: 4.6

There’s a ember glowing in my eyes
That flickers in the chill
A light that threatens soon to die
If it were not for my will.
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David McLansky
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Elaine Sept 14 August 2017

This poem is a stark reminder of the beauty of words you so masterfully orchestrate despite your life restraints! I am as always in awe and admiration of both the poet and the man Xo Elaine

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A very good poem, my friend. Keep writing.

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Katie Harrison 17 May 2013

A nice heartfelt poem. well written.

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Earl Clark 16 May 2013

A nice poem, thank you for sharing.

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