Riding On... Comments

Fine poetic lines..............

resumes routine round domain...never a bored sun...lovely write sir...10

the theme and your use of the right amount of words makes this poem a memorable one....picturizing the sun as the 'old man' expresses how one should respect this life sustaining source....very nice...

The poem is so amazing in its beauty which is its simplicity. What a great way to picturise sun....wonderful u deserve a perfect10 for this. Thanks for the beautiful experience.

mattullavarkkaay swayam kathiyeriyunna susnehamoorthiyaam sooryaaa...

excellent excellent excellent..hats off!

Clear and brilliant imagery through out. Very well written. Very nice.

Kesav I really liked the feel of the poem. Evolved emotion, and a sense of the scene. Good writer!

very very good! i really like it!

sunny imagery... made me walk on sunshine....

Wonderful piece, and what would we do if he did not awake each day to smile on us...........10

Great observation, imagination and simple but amazing depiction... Brilliant pieice... Sincerely, Kamran

Short and beautiful. A different and novel perception, wonderfully written. Thank you.

this is brilliant, you were right-I did like it.

Thank you for your comments on my poem image. as a learned and deep thought ful you writ good. i read some of yours all abscre.

You sketched this old man very well and drew the reader in. Very enjoyable, Kesav! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

Sweet and sunny verses..lots of tens

Well crafted Kasav, deep meaningful piece for the reader. regards Tom

I like your use of color here and appeal to the senses. A good poem leaving a lot for the reader to fill in and discover.

wonderful imagery! .......thoughtful observation.....thanks for sharing.