Wednesday, October 5, 2016

Riddled Sky Comments

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Sky,
is an obstacle
the riddled curtain
between up,
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mohammad ahmadizadeh
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Kevin Patrick 05 October 2016

hearts fire up their guns the stars are bullet holes on high Beautiful expression, and wonderful verse, the sadness is magnified within the imagery. Evocative well done.

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 08 October 2016

Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and writing kind words.

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