Thursday, July 10, 2008

~ Rid Of You ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

My bones tremble my body shakes
It feels as if the whole earth quakes
The cold surrounds me and freezes over my blood
All my feelings for you washed away with flood
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Ally Tenebrae
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~ Jon London ~ 20 July 2008

Great emotional piece Ally, ....when poems get written from the heart and speak to the reader...this is a fine example of how to create such a piece....keep up the great work best wishes Jon

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Pyro Fennema 10 July 2008

excellent poetry comes straight from the heart and not the mind. this is what seperates us from everyone else except a few ~Pyro the 1st

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