Rickshaw Puller Comments

The metaphor in your poem is Rickshaw puller for life and we all are pulling it in our own ways at different paths...Thought provoking poem.10

I can understand your strong feelings against injustice in this good poem, which you have tried to rhyme well and narrated in a very touching manner. I think you have wrongly used the word apathy at the end. What you had in mind was perhaps sympathy or empathy. Am I right?

Truly, we live a comfortable life at the cost of poor man's sweat and hardship and his life passed in poverty.