Rickety Rhyme Comments

mmmmmmmmmm this awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! like hickory dickory dock! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Mouse ran up the clock! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i loved your word play.. great indeed... with loves shan

This is very good, excellent rhyme and a good story 10+++

Very witty and funny John. It rhymes too lol. I wonder what inspired this one. Thank you for sharing. :)

hehe this was a fun one.. although quite a sad story really, it sounded so upbeat! good one =)