Rickety Rackety… Comments

So cute Imagining a young playful couple 🤗😍

I have read many of yior old classics, but this is amazing playful. When reading, the sound is like a classic song withn a slower read, a very enjoyable poem A cute masterpiece Kesav Sir! Thank you for sharing this cute poem with a tinge of humor. I like it very much to read this Classic!

HaHa, was she pretending to sleep? And he pretending to awaken her? Rickety Rackety + Rack!

a cute piece...very joyful to read

very naughty..if caughty? ? ? written in a great mood and youthful exuberance... verty nice.....oh get a new car and dont forget the couch...; -) cheers an ten

LOL! ! ! god knows I've met a couple of those!

haha, nice... write....nice one...simple.

I am afraid I interpret it false :) and a bit naughty: She to play sleepy and he to play soften? Funny little piece, like a tongue-twister... for two :)

Nice rickety, rackety! Thanks for sharing!

Now Kesav sir... why do I think I have to carry on with rookies at nookies smarty is hard, softie a tease.. slippety slappety... both well greased... You wanted green... but didn't give me please? ? ? ? arohanui

A cute story.Liked it.A full 10 for you.

This naughty poem reflects of moments when one is desirous and the other is not inclined but both make amends to please the other - the desirous one let's the mood pass and the one not inclined makes an effort to comply. Well expressed in short............arya

it appears to be like a puppet show, , , and in the end nothing happens, , , , still nice and funny, , from a good poet, ,

so...who got the worst of that agreement....this is clever and very cute....nice work

I have no idea why I find this funnily rude. t x