Monday, September 29, 2008

Richard Wake Up Comments

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Richard wake up there's no time to sleep
Richard please wake up because I need you with me
Momma gone Richard I already know you know
So please don't leave me Richard please don't go
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Jeanette Matthews
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Robert Quilter 29 September 2008

Strong and clear message.The poem flows nicely and i think i can hear the poets voice-which i don't often seem able to.Some of the words trip over themselves, but that's no big deal.I like'im crying my tears out'

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