Rich Wind Comments

I wish steal few lines from this poem to keep in my loving memories

I can see nice wind of feelings from your poem.Very sweet and good flow. I liked it.I got nice imagery in it.

simple yet effective

You know, I like the mood and the feel ofthis one...maybe not very poetically analytical words but that's just the way I read :) I think you could give it a little more impact though if you chose some stronger verbs to carry your imagery and the last line had me a bit confused. Did you mean..or would I ever be? ?