Rich Man Comments

Wow Fire and Brimstone Preachers delight Not my scene on this bright summers night

hi Alf, perse..afflunce cannot be a vice... unless ofcourse the other attributes that u have do eloquently penned... very nice poem it forces one to think about the imbalances in life...thanks for sharing cheers

A wonderful write, there are the rich (givers) and the rich (takers) and the latter include those who take man's very soul....I believe there is a payback

Pay back time comes to us all Alf...you have portrayed it so wonderfully here...exceptional write...thank you Fi 10+++

I would not comment about the morals of this piece since you were asking about criticism...Your QUATRAIN verses were well framed and so the succeeding stanzas were great...you have written it meticulously with fine; 1) alliteration 2) assonance 3) internal rhymes 4) end rhymes 5) metaphor This was a nice poetic narration.........great job here...10+++

You have a talent for verse.....something about which I know very little.....except when if it is good or bad and yours is good.

I say unto thee for sure............A camel can pass from the eye of needle but no rich man can enter into kingdom of heaven.......meeks shall inherit the earth.........Good Write.........10++++++++++

A well written poem, you are a good poet, look forward to reading more, 10 Lynda xx

this poem was ok nothin bad 2 say k

This is fantastic Dad, and so true

Very true words.........Thank you for sharing. Yours in poetry Jill

A sombre message well delivered. Ron

Beautiful poem. Seems like a fable or myth. Excellent rhyming.......10/10.