Sunday, December 10, 2017

Rich Girl Comments

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She was a rich girl from the city.
Prim, proper, and oh so pretty.
She wanted to live the country life.
Find a husband and become a wife.
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Lamar Cole
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 21 December 2017

How a rich, pretty girl from the city chooses to live a country life with a hard working man. A big story told with few lines in an amazing manner. Lovely poem, Lamar!

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Rini Shibu 10 December 2017

Lovely writings about a pretty city girl

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The Crow 10 December 2017

These poems are good but would be better if they were just a little longer Lamar. Think about it. :)

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Shakil Ahmed 10 December 2017

short but beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

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