Rich And Poor Comments

A strong and poignant write that captures poverty. Despite hardships in life one could propel himself to heights if he works hard ahead.of others. As the saying goes, early bird catches the.early worm. A wonderful poem with a meaningful message. Well crafted write.

The sun is red as an angry father Grown up kids run in hunger A black moon lives in his eyes He is dead sitting in his chair....wonderful poetic expression dear poet friend! A beautiful poem....10