Rhythm Unleashed 5 Comments

A good depiction of vain exultation of beauty - a loss of self in mere glamour devoid of substance. A well articulated and nicely encapsulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Farbe. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Well Farbre, this one is cool! Thanks for sharing..

Thank you for inviting me to read your poems. You have composed the verse beautifully. Keep writing keeping the unity of thought. Wish you all the best.

This seems to be very nice and beautiful. Amazing drafting shared in this page. Interesting...10

Extremely good write.. actually awesome for a 18 year old.. your poem has the rhythm, set some good grroooovvvy tune for these lines.. thanks for sharing

If with you I had ties I could've defined paradise...sounds quite romantic its for sure paradise but dont make it paradoxical lolz good write

Good work dear, liked the rhyme work, quite romantic

…For me truth is your lies You’re my snakes and ladders' dice For you I’m ready to do any sacrifice Confession of a passionate lover... nice work Thanks for sharing! !